Two chapters down…

Chapters one and two down, now on to chapter three. Reece decided to involve herself in affairs a lot sooner than I’d anticipated, but characters seem to want to do that to me lately.

Had a really awesome idea for Hadrian’s rescue, though, very different from the original draft. I’ll have to see if it works out in the draft as it’s formulating itself in my head. It involves Ky ‘slipping between moving vehicles. Very risky, but with the potential to be very, very cool.

Will update the previous post sometime later with the full When All’s Said and Done playlist as it stands right now.  Some songs may survive, others may not.  For now, time to punch out a couple hundred more words before the long, late mid shift today.

Some When All’s Said and Done music…

Thought I’d share some of the theme music for When All’s Said and Done.  Some of it’s old, some of it’s much newer.

The original songs for Kyle and Hadrian:

Kyle and Hadrian’s song: When I’m Gone, by 3 Doors Down

Hadrian’s song: Building a Mystery, by Sarah McLaughlan

New song for Kyle and Hadrian: Broken, by Lifehouse

Let the insanity begin…

Working on the redraft of When All’s Said and Done as we speak!  And mucking around with a tracker widget that doesn’t seem to want to work quite properly… Edit: the widget is, in fact, working, just not the way I want it to on my sidebar.

The beginning of this monster is a beast, because I can’t quite figure out how I want to start it.  Oh well.  I’ll fix it later if I decide to!

Back to writing…

Edit: Over 7,000 words as of 11:45 EST. Will be calling it a night soon.

The coming April insanity…

The thesis is done, turned in, and will be out for binding next week.  This means I suddenly have quite a bit more free time, and it’s high time I dedicated some of it to fiction once again.  Not just reading fiction, but writing it as well.  Since I’ve never been one for writing scripts, and April is Script Frenzy month from the OLL (the wonderful, crazy people who bring us Nanowrimo every year), I’ve decided it’s high time that I start redrafting my first even Nanowrimo project, When All’s Said and Done.  The characters have been on my mind of late, and it feels like it’s time.

There’s going to be major changes from the original draft to the second, in part due to the ramble I started scribbling last summer, one that’s brought a character that knows what’s going on inside the Institute into direct contact with Ky again, rather unexpectedly.  Because Ridley knows a lot of what’s going on inside, more than Hadrian ever could find out due to the rapid decline of his health, some of the twists in the original draft will need to be reworked.  It’s all Julia’s fault, really.  She brought him to Damon (her cousin who happens to be Matthew’s longtime friend), which means Damon called Matthew and everyone got involved with each other quite a bit faster than in the original draft, though I think that having Damon knee-deep from the start will work better.  He can still be a little annoyed with Matthew, but not nearly as annoyed as he was in the original draft.

Having Ridley there and able to tell Ky and Matthew things, however, does throw into question some plot twists, including the one that involves Tim Thatcher.  I suppose I’ll cross that bridge when I get there.  Before I do anything else, I need to decide what’s going to happen with the installation at Andover Commonwealth…whether they abandon it, or believe it’s secure in the wake of Ridley’s escape from the village with Julia’s help.

I imagine Reverend Stonard might pop up in When All’s Said and Done, too.  He seems as if he’d make a good villain.  And Laren, of course, trying to lay low.  The Tina character may disappear completely, since the new version will begin in August rather than November.

A lot to think about, and only a few days before I begin to redraft!  What fun will this be…

So, it’s been a while…

It’s been a long time since I wrote an update for this site, and it’s high time I did it, I decided today as I was syncing new books to my new Kobo E-reader (which I really like, by the way–I already re-read Gail Martin’s The Summoner and The Blood King on it within days of buying it).

First things first: the thesis is written and just awaiting printing and turning in to the grad studies office.  I’ll be doing that early next week.  I’m very proud of some sections of it, others I wish I’d had more time and better evidence for, but it’s done and my advisors are pleased.  It was a massive undertaking of almost 200 pages of actual text, which is about fifty pages longer than expected.  It’s come a long way from the original drafts.  I hope that Dr. Finucane would be proud of me.  As or further educational plans, I’m on the fence at the moment.  I think a month or two out from this and I’ll have my head on straight enough to start making decisions about what I want to do going forward.  I don’t think I’m going to make it to the Medieval Institute at K-Zoo this year, but I’m not counting that out yet.  It’s tempting to save for next year’s conference and possibly present a subchapter of my thesis.  We shall see…

I’m not currently GMing or playing any tabletops.  Kind of a bummer, since I really did like the Shadowrun game I’d been playing in, but the GM got busy with school and a social life, so I suppose I can’t blame him!  Andrew poked me a couple weeks back about gaming, but who knows if/when he’ll pop up again with ideas and such.  I don’t think I’ve got the mental wherewithal these days to GM anything myself.  I’ve got my hands full enough with RoA, AF, Court of 12/A World Forsaken, and my fiction!

Yes, my fiction!  I’m writing again, though I’m still getting back into the habit and swing of that.  I still have Ridley and Julia gnawing quietly at the back of my brain, but now they’re being joined by Lucas Ross and Korea Cooper as well.  I also want to get back to my E-557 trilogy as well.  There’s a lot of projects sitting quietly, waiting for me to return to them, and I have every intention of starting to dedicate a lot more of my time to those pursuits.

Strips for the quilt
The first quarter of the quilt put together

I’ve also gotten back to sewing and such–I have a beautiful quilt I’m working on (the top is about half done) that I need to finish.  That may be a chunk of my day on Saturday, since I have the day off work (yay!).  I may also see if my dad can run me to Jo-Ann’s for an hour or two so I can wander and look around, see what they’ve got on sale.  The St. Patrick’s Day fabrics should be on clearance pretty soon here, and I have an addiction to the color green and shamrocks.  Go figure.

 

So that’s about it for now.  I have new products up on Etsy as of a couple weeks ago and have been waiting for good weather and the ground to harden up a little bit more before I go outside and take more, new pictures of stuff to put up for sale.  No new shows upcoming–yet.  I’m considering some options for spring and early summer shows.  We’ll see what happens.

For now….time for WoW and writing!

GVSU 50th anniversary viral video!

I haven’t posted anything lately, but this requires it!  My mother caught a clip on the national news today and we went hunting the whole video.

Now, I was a student at Grand Valley State from 2000-2005; that’s where my BA in history/anthropology is from.

Interesting facts that you wouldn’t catch from the video:

  • Grand Valley State University hosts the only student run and organized Renaissance festival in the country. IN THE COUNTRY. Hence the swordfighting! The festival turned fifteen years old this year.
  • What you see in the video is actually a big loop around the center of campus, which is marked by the clock tower, which is a carillon tower, complete with working bells that play four times an hour.  The video works its way from the front of Kirkhof Center (which passes as GVSU’s student union) around and across the ravine until you see Kirkhof Center from the back at the end of the video, where the students are arrayed in the GV symbol on the lawn.
  • The crew team was about to crash into the shore of Lake Zurmberg at the end of the video: it’s a reflection pond and water collection area at the low point between several buildings.
  • There is not a whole lot to the campus.  In the video, you get glimpses of about 75% of the main, non-residential buildings on campus.

 

Very cool video and kudos to the students who made it!

Musings on YA fiction and projects left unfinished

I’ve been writing fiction since I was ten years old–for fun, serious writing, not because I had to for school or any other reason.  Most of it has been crap.  Some of it’s been okay.  I haven’t reached a point where I have a manuscript ready to send off to agents or publishers…but that will come sooner rather than later, I’d suspect.

Today, in the midst of cleaning the house and weeding out in the garden, I came across a few of my writing magazines that I hadn’t finished reading–this happens often enough, that I’ll get one of them and not finish reading them to my satisfaction and then they get shuffled someplace in an effort to get my mother to stop complaining about how everyone’s stuff is everywhere cluttering up her house (not going to offer commentary on that one).  So, at some point today I sat down on the couch and thumbed through an article from the May/June 2010 issue of Writer’s Digest that had YA agents and editors talking about the category — how to break into it, what they’re looking for, that kind of thing.

It got me to thinking a bit.  I’ve always written younger protagonists (there are a few notable exceptions, including several of the major supporting cast members in Epsilon and The Last Colony–heck, Adam Windsor is a PoV character in The Last Colony and he’s in his fifties–as well as characters in Fate and Second Chances and its untitled sequel…though I’m not entirely sure elves and dragons count as “older protagonists”), characters ranging from their late teens through their twenties.  In some ways, my characters have aged with me and in others, they certainly have not.

Paranormal and speculative fiction have become huge in young adult fiction, and that subsegement of the genre have yielded works that have transcended the age category (see: Harry Potter and as much as I hate to mention it, Twilight–Vampires do not sparkle thank you very much!).  To carry this even further and away from the article I read, manga, Japanese graphic novels, tend to have speculative, paranormal, and fantastic elements to them as a matter of course.  Manga is extremely popular in the United States–and growing in popularity all the time.

Which brings me to what really got me thinking–the untitled sequel to my D&D-inspired Fate and Second Chances already has two very strong teenage protagonists in it–Alysta Riverden and Kaelen Verrel–and could quite possibly be transformed into a YA novel.  It’s something I’ll have to think about, because the story as it stands right now (in its very early stages–there’s only about 23500 words of ramble to it) is planned to be about as much about Alysta’s father, Talasin, as it is about Lysta and Kael.

But it’s entirely possible, and could be fun.  I’ll just have to do some homework on it, and some thinking.  But maybe.  Just maybe…

…after all, high adventure does well, too.